The biggest parallel I saw between Jamison, Chen, and Baker is that in order to bring about about a positive change, you only need to do a few simple things. First, you must treat everyone with humanity, regardless of how inhumane their actions are. This is evident in Chen where C.G. was able to change a devout Westboro Baptist Church member, Meghan Pehlps-Roper, from a homophobic, antisemite to a loving philanthropist. Second, you must be willing to listen to what everyone has to say, just like Leslie Jamison listened to the victims of Morgellon’s disease. Finally, you must try to connect with people on an emotional level. Aspen Baker exhibited this through her program, Exhale, where she was able to connect with women who had just had abortions. The biggest issue I had in paper 1 was word choice. Taking more time on the next paper to make sure my sentences are conveying the exact idea I want them to will help improve the final quality of my paper. One strength in my first paper was how I made sure every paragraph directly connected back to my thesis. Obviously, this is a skill I want to continue in my subsequent papers. The main aspect of global revision I would like to focus on for future papers is my transitions. My first paper had several good ideas, but the shifts between them were choppy, especially in the first draft. I need to improve my transitions to make my papers easier to read and flow better.